The Prickly Pear
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Joined 06-17-11, id: 781713, Profile Updated: 05-26-13
Author has written 3 stories for General, and Humor.

Meet The Author

My name is Prickly, or Prickles if you'd like, and I have been writing for as long as I can remember. However, despite all this practice I've found it very hard to come by good constructive criticism or anything that will help me improve and what good help I have managed to corral over the years now knows me so well that it's hard for them to be objective, particularly when it comes to my characters. So, with that in mind, I ended up here.

Now, I don't review much myself, (I'm dyslectic and find reading off computer screens more difficult than it should be) but still, I am making a conscious effort to read and review more often and I will review anything you ask me to and be honest about it! All that being said I'm here for the reviews, for the comments which can help me improve my writing, harsh as they may be. If you ever come across something you dislike in my writing then tell me, my only condition being that you at least explain WHY you dislike it so I can learn from it.

While my initial foray into writing came in the form of Original Fiction, my focus quickly shifted to Fanfiction and only recently returned to the characters who started it all. One of my ambitions in life is to have some of my writing published but as it stands, that’s just a dream. A dream that your constructive feedback will hopefully help me achieve.


My Writing

- Definition of a Hero - "You know what the definition of a hero is? Someone who gets other people killed." A younger sister watches her hero die. Warning: Contains Capital Punishment. COMPLETE

- A Hairy What? - One holding cell, one pedophile, three teenaged girls and one seriously messed up conversation. You have been warned. COMPLETE

- Please Don't Leave Me - Young flesh mixed with old, moving, writhing. And voices mixing too, the screams of a girl with the growls of a man, like father and daughter. Or husband and wife. *Songfic. WARNING: Contains mentions of abuse and mental illness. COMPLETE


My Fanfiction

I have written for the following fandoms so far: NCIS Los Angeles, CSI Miami, and Harry Potter. For those of you interested in taking a peek, just click the link below.

The Prickly Pear’s Fanfiction.


Thank you for your interest and Happy Reading!

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Definition of a Hero reviews
"You know what the definition of a hero is? Someone who gets other people killed." A younger sister watches her hero die. Warning: Contains Capital Punishment.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Family/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,092 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/10/2011 - Complete
A Harry What? reviews
One holding cell, one pedophile, three teenaged girls and one seriously messed up conversation. You have been warned. Enjoy!
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,234 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/10/2011 - Complete
Please Don't Leave Me
Young flesh mixed with old, moving, writhing. And voices mixing too, the screams of a girl with the growls of a man, like father and daughter. Or husband and wife. ***Songfic. Contains mentions of abuse and mental illness.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,698 - Published: 6/20/2011 - Complete