Max Sorrell
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Joined 07-31-11, id: 790809, Profile Updated: 12-24-16
Author has written 5 stories for Humor, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, and Fantasy.

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My FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1826962/phantom130-5

Best Ever Albums:

Some Favorites:

Music: Delerium, Front Line Assembly, Pink Floyd, Gorillaz, Blur, Alice Cooper, Steven Wilson, Porcupine Tree, Jack White, White Stripes, My Morning Jacket, & XTC

Manga: One Piece, Ranma 1/2, Naruto, Kuroshitsuji, Fairy Tail, Neon Genesis Evangelion, Death Note, Clannad, Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica, & Assassination Classroom

Writers I Recommend: CRAZEDbySUGAR, DarknessesDownfall, Emily McCartney, jakbnimble, LegionWrex, Mylilblackpen, MysteriousFire, Psykofreac, SupaSaiyanGamer, Weird Girl 14, & Work-in-progress519

Character Index:

Karly Briefman - A young girl that lives next door to Teddy.

Teddy Meek - Main character in the Magic Shop, curious and sometimes mischievous, but also a bit cowardly.

What to say? I really love writing and listening to music. If you are interested I provided links to FanFiction which has some other works of mine and Best Ever Albums where I publish music charts and reviews. My writing is heavily anime inspired, but they are my original ideas and characters.

I got my start online back in 2010 on FanFiction, writing a Naruto FanFiction called the Naruto Spoofing. It was a moderate success and I enjoy writing it. But for as long as I can remember, I've wanted to write original stories. I found fictionpress about a year or two later through working on FanFiction and felt that it looked like a great platform to post my stories as well as read and share other people's stories. I'm not always on here, partly because school takes priority right now, but I'd like to try to breathe some life back into this site and review whatever stories catch my eye.

I've been writing pretty consistently since I came here, working on making my stories exactly how I've always visioned them to be. But you'll have to forgive me if updates may be slow or maybe even nonexistent at times. I used to try to get weekly updates out for many stories, but now I'd rather focus my time on one story at a time and make each chapter the best it can be before I publish it.

My main work is this series of books I call Apple. So far the only one that is up is the first volume, The Magic Shop. This will be a long and interesting series with many characters and branching storylines. If I could compare it to anything I'd say imagine a cross between One Piece and Ranma 1/2. There's a lot of humor, romance, and quirky characters, but the more time you invest in this world the more you'll see that nothing really is how it appears to be.

I think my writing is different than a lot of other stuff out there. I like to give everything I write a bit of a comedic edge while also trying to make character interaction the focus of my work. I believe that a well-rounded, relatable character will keep people wanting to come back. I like flawed characters, characters that feel like they just don't belong. I admire Harry, Hermione, and Ron's strong friendship throughout the later half of the Harry Potter series, but there's something really nice about taking several characters with nothing in common, that maybe even hate each other and trying to develop their relationship slowly over the series. It makes the friendship more believable in my opinion.

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Happily Ever After Inc by Emily McCartney reviews
Abigale has been the secretary for "The" Fairy Godmother for the past 16 years. But there is a new fairytale that needs help and Godmother thinks that Abigale is the perfect patsy to make this fairytale work.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 17,865 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 3/22 - Published: 11/27/2015
Good Boy Sammy by Dragons-without-fire reviews
Three years after his disappearance, the now fifteen year old Sam Phillips mysteriously turns up on his parents doorstep. But where has he been all these years? What happened the day he disappeared? Why isn't he talking? Even after he's granted his freedom, why is Sam protecting the one person he shouldn't?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 23,111 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 2/14 - Published: 11/20/2016
Through the Eyes of a Rapist by Jazzyjazzbear reviews
"I tried to tell myself that is was disgusting, that I'm not that kind of person."
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Crime - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,440 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 2/10 - Published: 2/8
The Burden of Being a Writer by MysteriousFire reviews
Nicholas Brown is not an ordinary writer. Every character he creates comes to life. They stick around him like tiny puppets that no one can see, determined to ruin his life like he ruined theirs.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 6,823 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 1/17 - Published: 9/10/2013
Shadows by afbrown reviews
Sometimes you see things that aren't quite there, sometimes you need them to be there, sometimes you convince yourself that they were there. Sometimes you realize that you were probably just going crazy, but it is hard to stop a crazed mind.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 539 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/17/2016 - Complete
49 Reasons Why I'm Sorry by nerdomfillstheair reviews
49 reasons why I'm sorry.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 501 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/17/2016 - Complete
The Beach by LadyRedPhoenix reviews
Sharla and her friends head down to the beach for a little fun in the sun. When Cindy, Kane's fiancee arrives. Kane and Cindy have a long awaited talk about their engagement.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,167 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 5/17/2016 - Published: 6/17/2015
Psychronicles by Psykofreac reviews
Mystier is a strange world with unusual creatures, mystical arts and even in certain regions, technological advances. The Occult Society exists to make discoveries in such a world. Join the adventures of four quirky teenagers of the agency through various missions in Mystier. A rewrite is in progress that will replace this version of the series, see ch.24 for more info.
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 118 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 12/18/2015 - Published: 12/16/2012 - Complete
CEREBRO by Dr. Crichton reviews
A man who had lived in a vegetative state for years due to a severe brain injury since childhood regained normal functioning by the miraculous technological advances of neuro- cybernetics. Little did he and the others around him knew, however, that he was created to be the most advanced weapon by a shadowy organization.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Mystery - Chapters: 40 - Words: 74,180 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 9/6/2015 - Published: 9/25/2012 - Complete
Piano and Fake Friends by PiNerd of the Hephaestus Cabin reviews
"They're toying with her because she's innocent and naïve and easily duped." Written for Short Story Saturday.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 362 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/20/2015 - Complete
The Bird's Tale by MysteriousFire reviews
A bird sat down by the window and induced a series of events. Short multichap, completed.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,750 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/15/2015 - Published: 6/12/2015 - Complete
Anima's Dancers by Weird Girl 14 reviews
Chrysolitus, a young Gemmian woman, wishes to become a Dancer of Anima. Such a silly dream among the villagers of Gemma. To be Anima's dancers, one must be unmarried & pure. As she starts her life as Anima's dancers, she will adjust to her new life. But is being a Dancer of Anima be as she dreamed and hoped of or would it be nothing but "False Luxury"? World: Terris Mundi
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 23 - Words: 34,584 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/10/2015 - Published: 7/29/2012 - Complete
Beacon of Faith by Effy Starling reviews
Emma wakes up in a new world and she has no idea what happened to her. When she finds out that the Princess of the White Kingdom had recently gone missing, she signs up to retrieve the Princess. Will Emma prove to be a beacon of faith or will she fail? (Will be REVISED and EDITED upon completion!)
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 27 - Words: 37,618 - Reviews: 56 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 4/27/2014 - Published: 2/18/2014 - Complete
No Longer Free by Weird Girl 14 reviews
Her village was burned down by raiders of the neighboring country of Atrox. Now she and what's left of her people are taken to the new village as slaves and prisoners, stripped of freedom. How her heart longs to return to the country of Fons, her homeland. World: Terris Mundi
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 29 - Words: 76,251 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 3/22/2014 - Published: 10/11/2011 - Complete
Stone Wall by SkyLyte reviews
A young, Jamaican girl plans on going to one of her dream destinations. Her male best friend decides to make it happen, but kidnaps her while she's on her way to work. This road trip will change the course of their friendship and make them see each other for who they truly are.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 9,337 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 2/16/2014 - Published: 7/24/2013 - Complete
Heaven by BrandNew reviews
Endless happiness, endless fun, don't worry about boredom, there will be none.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/21/2013 - Complete
The Secrets of the Moon by MysteriousFire reviews
Slowly she placed a bare foot on the ground. The grass tickled her toes. Another foot. And another. Slowly she proceeded through the meadow towards the forest behind it, unaware of the dangers hiding in the forest.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 543 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/2/2012 - Complete
Life Is A Balancing Act by ChibiJinchuuriki reviews
A short story told through the eyes of Annabelle, an old and abused circus elephant that performs a fateful act one night.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 784 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/5/2011 - Complete
How to Make a Cup of Coffee by Decidedly Undecided reviews
A step-by-step guide for those prone to caffeine addiction and spontaneous bouts of contemplation. Rated T for excessive introspection and references to stimulants.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 421 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/21/2011 - Complete
Lacey and the Shroom by Decidedly Undecided reviews
Lacey had had it with that smart-alecky mushroom and its thankless ways, so she decided to give it what for. One of my stranger pieces.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 692 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/27/2009 - Complete
Five Afflictions of Online Fiction Writers by Mockingbyrd's Tune reviews
There are multiple epidemics among us. Make sure you are not infected!
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,998 - Reviews: 100 - Favs: 72 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 5/19/2008 - Published: 4/29/2008 - Complete
Ode to Paperclip Man by DiaRose reviews
I was bored and he was bugging me, so I wrote this poem for pure silliness! You'll appreciate this if you write with Mircrosoft Word.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 62 - Favs: 106 - Follows: 7 - Published: 8/28/2007 - Complete
I Would Die Too Darling I Would Die With You by hi-tanner85 reviews
He would've followed her anywhere, except . . .
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 90 - Follows: 7 - Published: 9/27/2005 - Complete
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The Magic Shop reviews
I take a step and she's two steps ahead. I move backward and she already knows my move. She's my best friend and my first love. But after getting involved in magic her mental state has changed. She's become possessed with magic, now a shadow of who she once was. I can only guess at her motives. But I fear if I can't change her back the end of the world will come soon.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,041 - Reviews: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/1/2016
The Auction reviews
It's the same way every year... Cover by: InToXiCaTeD-StOcK on Deviantart
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 872 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/30/2013 - Complete
Running Through Time reviews
This is a free verse poem. It's about growing up with someone who eventually leaves your life, and even though you were never very close you wish you got to know that person better.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/25/2013 - Complete
Lover's Song reviews
A lonely fisherman hears his lover's voice while at sea. Cover by canacee on Deviantart
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Published: 6/4/2013 - Complete
Monsters during Halloween reviews
Us monsters were always told to avoid humans no matter We lived our lives in hiding hoping to go However, one Halloween night a werewolf named Wolf catches sight of something that changes the way three monsters live This story is beta'ed by Dragon-Rider C
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K - English - Parody/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,048 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/30/2011 - Complete
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