I am trying horror writing for the first time. This is just a short story, and I'd really like as much constructive criticism as possible to answer one question for me... is it scary? And if not... how to make it scary? Thank you so much!
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,568 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 8/14/2011 - Published: 8/10/2011 - Complete