Monty Mason
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Joined 01-26-12, id: 822981, Profile Updated: 10-03-18
Author has written 27 stories for Young Adult, General, Fantasy, Horror, Manga, Life, Spiritual, Romance, Humor, Supernatural, and Nature.

Hello lovely readers and writers alike, how are you?

Please call me Monty.

I love to read fiction and fan-fiction of others (although due to time constraints and a busy life, I can never get around to reading much...okay, I'm also partially lazy). I love to write my own as well which I try to make as original as possible, even if it's within an established fandom and canon universe for a fan-fiction. I want to provide value to my readers as you are kind enough to provide me with your time and attention (and hopefully a review *wink wink nudge nudge hint hint*).

Fanfiction profile:

Also, just as an addition of sorts to the profile here. I just want to say to my readers that you will rarely see me releasing stories frequently. That's because I want to take my time and treat my stories right instead of rushing them and releasing them. I know everyone values their time, so I would rather try to give the best product possible for my readers that can help fill up their free time without any regrets of wasting that time. Therefore my way of working is, I write the story first, edit it and then release it once it has been completed. If I do get critique, I implement it onto my future works.

Exceptions do apply to the above paragraph. Namely in stories I have had no in-depth planning done for and am writing it on the spot. Those I will release as I finish a chapter because I find that perhaps getting feedback for them is better as I write them. Plus, a lack of planning can leave those types of stories and me stumbling about, and reviews that encourage or also respectfully critique can help be a positive push!

I hope you enjoy my work!

- Monty

UPDATES section:


- Stories in the planning phase: *Currently on hold *

-- Runaway (Drama/Slice of Life)

-- Boy Gender Girl (Drama/Romance/Slice of Life)

-- The World Ruler (Drama)

-- Beyond Earth (Drama/Sci-Fi)

-- Life: Existence (Drama/Romance/Slice of Life)

-- Tea House: Generations (Slice of Life)

- Stories in the writing phase:

- Stories in the editing phase:

- Stories currently being posted:

Note: If you there is a story you saw on the list you were looking forward to, but has been removed. It means that work has been discontinued on that particular story.

Does Monty Give Reviews Back?

I'm quickly going to list my thoughts on the review for review deal. I don't necessarily have anything against it, I don't tend to really get to it as soon as I get a review from someone (I'm lazy like that). However that doesn't mean that I won't review one of your stories in return, I'll get to it...eventually lol. And what I review back is basically dependent on how well constructed the reviews left on my stories are. So if it's something like "This is great, you should continue" or "This sucks!" then explain why you said that. That's the whole point of the review so the author can see any hints of improvements on their story. Basically, you leave a good review, and I pay you back with a good one myself (and believe me, when I get reviewing, I really get reviewing as I tend to leave quite long reviews with in-depth analysis). I know it's hard to get reviews on this site, so let's help one another out eh? :)

DISCLAIMER: My reviews may tend to be extremely critical and sometimes sound harsh due to my blunt nature, but that's because I want to see you IMPROVE. If you're the sensitive type then I highly advise against requesting a review from me. Also keep in mind, I only review stories that interest me.

Notice of Copyright: 2010 to present, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.

Well, happy reading!

- Mohit

This work by Mohit Goyal is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 International License.

To Anyone that will still consider copying my work without my permission (especially for commercial uses), I WILL file a DMCA infringement report against your attempt.

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Anywhere, Everywhere by aclmohle reviews
"Where will you go next?" She shrugged. "Anywhere, everywhere." *** A short story about travel, serendipity, and spontaneity.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,396 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/1/2018 - Complete
First Day's lunch by CMfan5000 reviews
A silly bit of nonsense about a good natured drunk trying to order lunch at a diner.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 533 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/31/2017 - Complete
Accidents by AlternatingCurrent reviews
A mother goes for a picnic with her beloved son, only for him to reveal a chilling dark secret...
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 945 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/10/2017 - Complete
The Tale of Hermaphrodite by Prince Jacque reviews
They called you an ugly name, so you made it beautiful...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,028 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/2/2017 - Complete
Black Holes by madeleine68 reviews
My essay on black holes.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 675 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/26/2009 - Complete
Guide For Fictionpress Reviews by ColorCrayons reviews
This is Mack from Clodhopper. My cousin and I have been asked a few times how we get so many reviews. This is our response. I hope it helps!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,744 - Reviews: 119 - Favs: 137 - Follows: 18 - Published: 8/7/2005
Reviews: The Case For Constructive Criticism by Madcow13 reviews
Do you get offended when people give you constructive criticism? Do you know someone who gets cross when other people point out their mistakes? Why? What exactly is so wrong with a little critique?
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,231 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/26/2005
Constructive criticism by Werecat99 reviews
Tired of the 'plz r&r my stuff' reviews? Read these simple guidelines to constructive criticism. Tips on how to get more reviews included.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,032 - Reviews: 212 - Favs: 140 - Published: 2/24/2004
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Mother Cries
An abstract poem I wrote in a workshop, where we write poems about climate change and submit to the local nature conservation committee and help bring attention to this topic.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Published: 11/26/2022 - Complete
7 Wonders of the Unknown reviews
There are so many things we do not know yet. So much knowledge and so many wonderful encounters we have yet to experience. It is said that there are seven wonders that those with special sight can experience. These wonders pertain to the afterlife world and the unknown. I want to experience it, no, I need to experience it. I am...curious.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 8 - Words: 19,065 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 3/12/2017 - Published: 2/16/2017 - Complete
Get Over It reviews
Mitch stood by the lake side wondering why things had to happen the way they did. As he skipped stones that sweet voice kept on echoing in his ears, that moment kept on flashing before his eyes. Yet even in the darkest of times, one can always find comfort in the words of a trusted friend. A short slice of life & drama story.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,699 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/18/2016 - Complete
Fantasia: A Legend's Birth reviews
The world of humans stands fragile on the balance between pure and dark mana. One boy comes to Legedermain academy, a place of magic to destroy dark mana and face his own past. All the while being haunted by the destruction of his own home planet and the dark creature living within him. This is his story, Yakiko Senju's story.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 141,742 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 1/7/2016 - Published: 10/7/2013 - Complete
Horror Stupidity reviews
Three teens: the jock, the blonde and the nerd enter an old creaky house, but only one comes out. Follow their adventures through the horror cliches and at how the writer takes a piss all over them in his own comedic way. Halloween special, Happy Halloween!
Fiction: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,675 - Reviews: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/31/2015 - Complete
Winter is all About reviews
In a wintry Tokyo, a group of musicians discover their next piece of music. Their lyricist, "Takumi" however struggles wondering What Winter is all About...! Join him on his adventures and experiences as he discovers a different side to winter. - A slice of life story -
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 19,639 - Reviews: 7 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 8/13/2015 - Published: 7/31/2015 - Complete
Hansel and Gretel V: Legend to Fairytale reviews
Years after Hansel and Gretel's death, their children lead peaceful lives only to be soon interrupted by the terrible past that shall hunt them. Torture, survival, instincts, blood and freedom…this is their fight for such against those wanting revenge against Hansel and Gretel. This is their story as they now end the legend of Hansel and Gretel!
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Horror - Chapters: 7 - Words: 21,831 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 6/7/2015 - Published: 5/29/2015 - Complete
Bathhouse Cafe - New Life reviews
In the desolate streets of Akihabara, Japan lies a mystical cafe known only to those in need of it. It is a cafe that calls out to the troubled, the yearning and give them a fresh breath to face the world with a new perspective, a new life. - Slice of life story with small supernatural elements mixed in. - Reviews for Reviews welcomed. Enjoy!
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Humor/Supernatural - Chapters: 7 - Words: 47,198 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/5/2015 - Published: 1/2/2015 - Complete
Writer's Challenge 2 - White Day reviews
Why is it we haven't adopted White Day out here in the West? This question bugs me the most...Oh hello there! Would you perhaps happen to know the answer? Or maybe you're looking to find the answer yourself? Then come on in and let's contemplate it, or just read me doing it. Dang this is one tough question to find an answer to... - Theme is White Day -
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,235 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/14/2015
Writer's Challenge 1 - Do Not Enter reviews
Come join him on a venture in which he fights a battle against time and a door saying, "Do Not Enter". Come as he ponders why it says as such and end up trying his best to hold it in. Come to see his short moments in this battle with his struggle against the pee wee! - Written fro a Writer's Challenge, theme: Do Not Enter - Rated T for language.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,218 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/15/2015 - Complete
Hansel and Gretel IV: True Inheritors reviews
The twins that once found a new path in life now return to judge their rotting world as the true inheritors. Yet doubts linger and deceit grows a gaping rift, the twins wonder if they ever really were the True Inheritors to begin with? *Fourth and perhaps final installment in the series.*
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror/Crime - Chapters: 7 - Words: 40,257 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/21/2014 - Complete
Summer is all about reviews
Join two girls over the course of their summer holiday as they try to together figure out the meaning behind summer. While one struggles to understand and acknowledge these sprouting feelings inside her heart. A Slice of Life story.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 21,138 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/20/2014 - Complete
Teasers: Fantasia II - The Dark Lord reviews
This is a simple place to put in all the teasers for my upcoming Fantasia II: The Dark Lord story. Right now don't know when it will be released but that will be specified in one of the teasers when the story is near completion.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,803 - Reviews: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/7/2014
Hansel and Gretel III: A Legacy's Will reviews
Visit once again the twisted world of Hansel and Gretel as they set out to terrorize Baltimore and look to carry on their parents' legacy. However along the way they also learn a thing or two showing their imperfections and room for growth. Their hunger and twisted-ness increases as does the terror.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror/Family - Chapters: 6 - Words: 33,689 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/24/2013 - Complete
Life: Bonds of Life reviews
The girl with a normal family and normal bonds, the boy with a broken past and isolation. The girl reaches out to the boy wanting to show him the values of bonds in human life and help him change. I know summary sucks, but tell me what you think.
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 23 - Words: 124,802 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 6/13/2013 - Published: 4/28/2012 - Complete
Cry of the Innocence reviews
A dog does what he needs to ease someone's suffering. And a boy sees the society through pure eyes as it is covered in corruption, greed and hatred. Society is a name masked with a plaster of superficial-ism. Join Koharuo the dog and Kei the boy in their few moments together to realize so much in their lifetime about the world they live in.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,567 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4/4/2013 - Complete
Life Philosophies reviews
This story is a make up of different philosophies and views I have in life and will express them here in. This is like a journal/diary type of story. Got your own views to share on the subjects I write about? Then feel free the drop them off in the review section ).
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,591 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10/14/2012 - Published: 2/27/2012 - Complete
Hansel and Gretel II: Legends into Myths reviews
The two of history's most mass murderers are back and are sicker and darker than ever. Hansel and Gretel, the two twins who set off as vampires come to Romania in their quest for blood. -Please read and tell me what you think of it . Note: Its rated M for a reason.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 11,876 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/19/2012 - Complete
Life: What Are Dreams to You? Rewrite
This is the rewrite of the original one in a different narrative perspective. Summary: Should humans disregarding dreaming in the light of day? For if you do so, you may live, but you may cease to exist. Takoda is one such dreamer who wishes to fly.
Fiction: Manga - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,293 - Published: 3/11/2012 - Complete
Life: Pathways of Life reviews
A brother trying to help, a sister wrapped up in something far bigger than herself. The two come to intersect on unexpected pathways. In-direct sequel to Life and Life II, Enjoy!
Fiction: Manga - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Mystery - Chapters: 17 - Words: 29,491 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3/10/2012 - Published: 2/9/2012 - Complete
Life: Light of Life reviews
A suicidal boy and a love struck girl stuck together through an unforeseen meeting. Now they take a spiraling journey together to find the light of life in this boy's life and show him there is more to life than death. If you've any suggestions, do tell.
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 30 - Words: 40,188 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/5/2012 - Published: 1/29/2012 - Complete
Life 1: What Are Dreams to You? reviews
Takoda is a dreamer who dreams of flying but is left restrained down to earth by gravity. He desperately wishes for it and dreams of it remaining loyal to his dreams. But life is never that easy in the real world.
Fiction: Manga - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,633 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/29/2012 - Complete
Hansel and Gretel: Vampires in the Dawn reviews
Hansel and Gretel are two happy content twins. Yet their life will soon take a turn for the worst as vampires will be born of them. I hope you do enjoy my dark take on Hansel and Gretel fairy tale , but not so appropriate for a fairy tale anymore lol.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,501 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 2 - Published: 1/28/2012 - Complete
The Sacred Land reviews
I've always wondered what my dreams meant. I've always wondered where they will take me. And those questions were answered as I experienced humanity's birth and destruction. A inspirational story from Call of Cthulhu - Dark Corners of the Earth game.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,367 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/28/2012 - Complete
The Traumatic reviews
Our character suffers through self doubt as to is he really sane or is he really fabricating his reality?
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 542 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/28/2012 - Complete
Beneath Reality
Reality is a very complex concept, yet for use everyday life seems real. But sometimes we maybe deceived as we have to look beneath reality to discover and further ourselves in life.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,536 - Published: 1/28/2012 - Complete
Life's Perfection reviews
This is a life about a normal teenager who is rich until his life takes a turn for the worst as he slowly plunges into the deep dark world of drugs.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,438 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/28/2012 - Complete