Narcisus Inez Xilian
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Joined 04-10-12, id: 835215, Profile Updated: 03-14-13
Author has written 6 stories for General, Action, Horror, Fantasy, and Young Adult.

Hey, this is Inez, doesn't that sound like a vampire's name?, or NIX and I guess I'll tell you a little about myself. I have been writing since I was very young (4? 5?) and reading since I was two.

I believe my first spoken reasoning for writing stories was 'I want to read a story about (blank) but no one has written it yet... I guess I'll just write it myself!'

I like reading fantasy, action, adventure, some romance, and supernatural and I write whatever comes to mind. I like stories with basis in reality that shift to other realities by some significant time branch- currently I have an obsession with zombies -_-' not really sure what that says about my mental state...

My favorite books are:

The Three Musketeers

The Legend of Willow Wood Springs

Captain Hook Adventures of a Notorious Youth

Magician (Raymond E. Feist)


Hood (King Raven Trilogy)

monkey. monkey. monkey. monkey. (that word is really annoying to type over and over) rabbit. rabbit. rabbit.

Pet Peeves:

In Post Apocalyptic Stories: There's just something that irks me about zombie stories or other disease/war related stories where the main character or one of the main characters is just okay with it. No one is okay when they see their mother eaten by a zombie in front of them- unless they are crazy; and if that's the kind of character you have then that is perfectly fine because it is realistic.

In Demon Stories: When a demon is actually 11-17 years old in a society where they live for thousands of years and they are somehow the best at everything they do. I know I'm basically describing a Mary Sue but it really only bothers me in Demon stories for some reason. If you're society lives forever and you are basically the equivalent of a four year old you can not do things that the demon king 'who is almost a million years old' can do.

In Romance Stories: If you want to write a story about yaoi, incest, yuri or other things that may or maynot offend certain people put it in the description. Or at least in nice pretty bold letters at the top of your story. I also can't stand it when a guy is an ass to the main girl (or the other way around) and somehow she thinks it is endearing rather than the traits of an asshole. At least let her angst about liking such an unlikable person. Oh- and 'perfect' characters. No guy is 'perfect' girls. And the same applies to girls- if there is such a 'perfect' person they need to have at least one fatal flaw that makes the story worthwhile otherwise it's pointless to have a story. (e.g. Sue likes the handsome, inteligent, flirtatious, strong, silent/bold/random endearing trait to girls, Joe. he confesses he likes her once she gets up the courage to say something and the next fifteen chapters is their perfect relationship) NEWSFLASH! No one wants to read a story about someone who isn't like them in some way. We want to identify with your character.

For Reviewers: I am totally okay with anonymous reviews asking questions! I'll answer them in the chapter. The thing I really hate is when people tell me things like 'you italicise too much' 'you shouldn't use this writing type for this type of speech'- look it's my writing and if I decide that hissing like a snake uses instead of " then that's my own personal choice. If you want to say something helpful I will gladly take it as constructive criticism and use it wisely. Another note- if you are just going to tell me 'this story is crap' or 'you suck at writing' or something along those lines don't even comment. It is rude and wastes both my time to read it and yours to write it. If my story offends you enough that you feel you should let me know do it in a way that isn't just badmouthing my style or story ideas.

I'll post more when I think of them :p

(This is just a line because FP. com doesn't like my sister's cute little emoticons I had instead)


So, I have a forum I just started because I love to role-play. Here's the link:

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The Wordless Song by KatnissWriter reviews
The origin of the hummingbird in Greek mythology. A gripping tale of love, rebellion, loss, and sacrifice. Please read and review.
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,627 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/5/2012 - Complete
Zombie Survival Guide version 2 by Endless Autumn reviews
A Zombie Survival guide, not the complete version. as in, the Complete Zombie Survival Guide
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,282 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 6 - Published: 9/26/2008
Infected by Omnipotent Shrew reviews
Zombie story from the zombie's perspective.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 719 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/2/2007 - Complete
Zombie Party by Archica reviews
The world falls into the grip of a zombie outbreak, but a handful of teenagers decide to fight back.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,761 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 7/30/2007 - Published: 12/16/2005
Loneliness by Grunge Muffin reviews
This is a about the guy, (or girl) that no one notices. Every school has one. You know, the guy that you don't notice, the one who's name you don't even know. Well I looked around today, and saw that guy, and wondered what it would be like to be him.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 433 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 11 - Published: 11/12/2002
To The Rescuers by Fire of the Vampire reviews
September 11, 2001. To the rescue workers whose efforts to save someone else haven't gone unnoticed.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 411 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/20/2002
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Animated But Not Alive reviews
Zack Brennings never thought of himself as a bad person. He'd never thought of himself as a good person either though. He'd actually rarely thought of himself at all. But when things start going crazy he starts to really think about himself- and he doesn't like what he finds; but maybe 'bad' isn't bad, maybe it's just what he needs. -READ WARNINGS INSIDE!
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Crime/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,840 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1/23 - Published: 11/9/2013
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35,499 - Published: 2/17/2013 - Complete
Forbidden Games
TENTATIVE TITLE. A boy of prophecy- bound by fate to make or break the world. How will this prophecy be affected by the kidnapping of the boy by none other than the acting Death? How will the boy know what is right and wrong when he sees people slaughtered on a whim almost daily? And perhaps there is another? (Possible Slash- explained inside)
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 608 - Published: 2/17/2013
You Can Sleep When You're Dead reviews
Some things are too horrible or fantastical to face. Some experiments are too immoral to be preformed. Some secrets should never have been kept. What deadly secrets are my friends hiding? Might be changed to M for graphic deaths and gore. Zombies!
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 19,873 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 9/22/2012 - Published: 4/30/2012
To Die For
Aliya might seem the unassuming rich-girl but she's sharper than she lets on and once she gets a hold on Garret she won't let go, no matter the opinions of others, no matter the scars.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Romance/Crime - Chapters: 2 - Words: 9,131 - Updated: 4/23/2012 - Published: 4/12/2012
Worth the Fight
He was proud and caring. She was rash and bold. After escaping a group of criminals Thrush is confronted with a reality he doesn't want to face and runs with young Wildcat. Now the ones who would have them dead have found them, and they're not leaving.
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,395 - Published: 4/12/2012