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Author has written 5 stories for Young Adult, General, Romance, and Fantasy.

As always, I appreciate any and all constructive feedback, no matter how harsh. In particular, I could use some pointers on where my story seems to lose tension.

I have lived all over the United States, and currently live in Florida. I've been trying to write (unsuccessfully) for awhile. I was able to complete a lengthy fan fiction story with the little bit of motivation provided by a few stalwart individuals there.

I'm also trying to write some original full length stories in both young adult and mature categories. I'm hoping to receive enough feedback here to keep me properly motivated and to improve. Please leave constructive and detailed feedback. If you are interested, I will be glad to return all reviews.

My fanfic is based on the movie Let Me In under the name "Realbullet". It's written for mature readers -- thanks for reading.

The Mute and The Liar by Victoria Best reviews
I am a mute who only cares about mysteries. He's a liar who only cares about his youth gang. I didn't mind him, until he decided to break into my house, steal my salad, and oh yeah, kidnap me. / Most creative plot SKOW award winner / Featured on Project Fiction / story removed.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,638 - Reviews: 539 - Favs: 175 - Follows: 232 - Updated: 5/16/2015 - Published: 3/11/2012
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They have seventy two hours to figure out what to do with me. In the mean time, I'm just going to study all of the crackpots who are stuck in here with me.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,782 - Published: 5/23/2017
The Shattered End of Hollow Canyon (formerly known as PedoCelia) reviews
"She can't weigh more than ninety pounds. As soon as you see her, just grab her." That's what Dee told him, and Cody Kroft always had a soft spot for young girls. He couldn't bring himself to kidnap her. That didn't work out so well for Zandra - Now he has met Celia, an intriguing, troubled young girl living next door. Mature Content.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 65 - Words: 231,241 - Reviews: 52 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 6/6/2016 - Published: 6/12/2012
Shoes and Ships and Shimmer Songs reviews
Let me get this straight, right off – I don't want your pity. I'm not some stupid cripple. You're no better than me just because you wear fancy shoes and walk without a limp. I detest that pathetic glance you all give me when you see me shuffling home at the end of a long day. I don't want you to tell me how you sympathize because you once had a hang nail.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 14,681 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4/10/2016 - Published: 12/1/2014
Middle Class Revolution: A Predystopia reviews
This takes place in an alternate reality where a plutocratic elite purchase government in the name of democracy. They pay millions to the government to receive billions in tax loopholes & contracts while ignoring economic infrastructure needed to support them. Good public debate is reduced to concerns as to where the President is born or how the president 'stole' the election.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 9 - Words: 20,766 - Reviews: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/9/2012 - Published: 5/15/2012
Follow the Dodo reviews
Life along the eastern seaboard of the United States has a lot more than Gar expects. Gar begins middle school only to learn that some of his classmates hold the keys to greater secrets than he would even expect. Intended for 8-12 year-olds.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 8,141 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6/22/2012 - Published: 5/5/2012