![]() *ATTENTION TO PEOPLE WHO ARE BAD AT SUMMARIES OR ARE PUBLISHING THEIR FIRST FANFICTION*
Bad Description- If you can't write the description, then you probably can't write the story. It's logic, not rocket science. Please Read- You can't get any reviewers, so you resort to begging. If you can't get any reviewers: then you probably suck or your genre isn't very popular. First Fanfiction- It's going to suck and your are never going to finish it. I will NOT give any of you people a chance, also I probably wouldn't notice if you didn't point it out. You have no idea how annoying it is to see those words so much... *Advice for Formatting* Now selecting this from a random fanfiction: His arms went around her waist turning her to face him she tried to keep her eyes on the ground but he called her name, "Caroline, look at me please." Well she had to look at him then never regretting looking up into those blue orbs until now when she really had to sneeze. "You're freezing Love," he said running his hands up and down her back feeling her shiver beneath him. "Yeah that's it." Caroline said wiping her runny nose with her handkerchief."Let's get you into bed," he says quietly reaching for her coffee not knowing if it was okay for her to drink it while sick. Her greedy hands took it from his own taking a sip her pale cheeks gaining some color as he watched her. "Thank you," she whispered taking his hand in her own and leading him further into the apartment where he had never been. Do you see how difficult this is to keep track of? Well it couldn't be the spacing could it? This is how people should format anything: His arms went around her waist turning her to face him she tried to keep her eyes on the ground but he called her name, "Caroline, look at me please." Well she had to look at him then never regretting looking up into those blue orbs until now when she really had to sneeze. "You're freezing Love," he said running his hands up and down her back feeling her shiver beneath him. "Yeah that's it." Caroline said wiping her runny nose with her handkerchief. "Let's get you into bed," he says quietly reaching for her coffee not knowing if it was okay for her to drink it while sick. Her greedy hands took it from his own taking a sip her pale cheeks gaining some color as he watched her. "Thank you," she whispered taking his hand in her own and leading him further into the apartment where he had never been. Isn't that easier to read? I will not have much patience for any piece for writing that is not formatted like that. Do you notice the pattern? Once again, this isn't rocket science. Whatever Klaus does goes in one little mini "paragraph" (not sure what you call those, but you get the idea), and whatever Caroline does goes in one mini "paragraph". |