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Joined 06-24-12, id: 850778, Profile Updated: 01-12-14
Author has written 4 stories for Young Adult, and Romance.

Hi

I'm Eliza, and writing is something I dabble around in. I'm not a professional, I doubt I'll ever be one, and really this is just for fun. Updating will be varied, according to my study schedule, and real life, which frankly, is more important.

Please don't be unecessarily harsh in your reviews to me or to other people, as you don't pay us and therefore don't have a say in how we write our stories. Constructive criticism is always welcome however.

If you want any help with beta-ing or just a friendly opnion, feel free to PM me; I'd love to help out.


My Stories:

The Silent Musician (Complete) - This is the first story I ever wrote and actually finished, so I'm proud of it for that reason. That being said, I know there's some awkward character progression and plot inconsistencies, and although I'm extremely critical of my own work, I know it's not the best. However, I do like the story (though I was a little sadistic with the ending) and I'll keep it up for nostalgia.

The Sun and the Moon(Complete) - A little oneshot that demanded to be written. I'm actually really fond of this story (Luna's my favourite character!) and am quite pleased with the standard.

Forever?(Complete) - Oooh, I've finished it. It was cut short by exams etc, but I liked the way it ended. There was also lots of fluffy sweetness, and it was my first attempt at that stuff, so it turned out alright :)

Currently working on a majorly long story; so it might be a while before I publish anything.

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BLACK CHERRY by sakurazuki reviews
Haruki Shinjo came to Tokyo with one goal: to finish college and make her parents proud. Nevermind the fact that she's a frustrated rockstar while her own cousin happens to be in a band with three other (cute) guys. When she finally gets her shot at fame, Haruki is left to decide: Does she have what it takes to become a part of the next big thing?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 31,487 - Reviews: 1033 - Favs: 376 - Follows: 225 - Updated: 4/1 - Published: 10/22/2004
Simple Tips to Improve Your Writing by Rebel Maru reviews
Writing is like constructing a road. Like many things, the Romans had it down, but some days, you just know something's going to run you over as you attempt it. Whether that be grammar, style, characters, plot or even the dreaded writer's block, writing a story is never easy. As an aspiring author, these are my tips for beating those issues into the dirt (or tarmac).
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,844 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 4 - Published: 3/22/2013
Goodnight Saigon by effervescent-sentiments reviews
Dear Jennifer. I write you letters in my head, sometimes. Things of this nature, in greater detail. Horrific things I could never relive on paper. Feelings that I’d never be able to tell you to your face. Just know that this is what you love. Lewis.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 18,265 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 56 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 3/27/2009 - Published: 3/25/2009 - Complete
DELICIOUS by iBrandi reviews
“I’ll sell my body, I don’t know.” He ate another cookie. “THIS IS SO GOOD. I want to have epic sex with your baking skills.” An instructional guide on how to snare males in the trap of awesome cooking.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,788 - Reviews: 336 - Favs: 1,106 - Follows: 80 - Published: 3/17/2009 - Complete
Get Mad, Baby by DevonnyAuriel reviews
Oneshot. Sometimes being a scorned woman is an incredible turnon. At least to a guy who's been in and out of anger management.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,399 - Reviews: 219 - Favs: 930 - Follows: 49 - Published: 10/28/2007 - Complete
The Official Mary Sue Manual by TA Maxwell reviews
Mary Sues. We all know them, the perfect character we all have made at one point. This manual is for the growing fiction and fanfiction community on how to recognize and avoid creating a Mary Sue.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,430 - Reviews: 174 - Favs: 205 - Follows: 3 - Published: 11/6/2003
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Stardust reviews
She's the servant of a troublesome demon prince. And when he goes to play hooky in the Human World, it's her job to bring him back for his upcoming wedding. He, however, has other ideas.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,907 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 8/22/2013 - Published: 6/2/2013
Forever? reviews
Matthew Archer is the face on every billboard, every magazine, every poster on the wall of a teenage girl. With the voice of an angel and the looks to match, he quickly shot to fame as an attractive, single pop idol. Except he's been dating Emma, a journalist, for seven years, and she's tired of being his well-kept secret.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 15,894 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 26 - Updated: 4/14/2013 - Published: 3/5/2013 - Complete
The Silent Musician reviews
Marielle's mute and invisible, but she's a musical prodigy. Daniel pretends to be rich, but he's working two jobs to support his family. When they meet, it affects the people around them in ways nobody could have foreseen. Complete.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 25 - Words: 57,035 - Reviews: 113 - Favs: 48 - Follows: 35 - Updated: 1/26/2013 - Published: 8/27/2012 - Complete
The Sun and the Moon reviews
The firstborn son of the Brennan royal family was promised to the firstborn daughter of the Syen royal family; it was an agreement designed to unite two warring nations. The only problem? The Syen family had twins. ONESHOT.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,910 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/19/2013 - Complete