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hiya its tecnicalKnockout here ... I'm probably not the best writer, but i have been stricken with sudden inspiration to soar O-or fail epically whichever comes first ... probably the later... i don't clam to the the master of grammar periods commas and or semicolons and me and spelling are on pretty rough terms (spell check is my best friend) but i Will try my best .. *takes a deep breath*OK here goes nothing i love reviews positive and negative, other wise ill just feel stupid and lose what little courage i managed to pull from under my couch and ill be all (・・・（。＿。；）no ones listening who are you even talking to get out of the way) i love writing but have always been to chicken to post anything for fear of angry mobs...ill just stop talking now ...one last thing my authors note will probably change nationality with my mood just a little quirk i have ok now im done hopefully you'll hear from me again :)
Hey there this NaeNaeKnockout I am good at spelling and grammar but sometimes i leave out small details in story. I have my best friend for creative ideas and keep my creative brain working. I love to write stories. I might use a lot of commas but last time i checked i wanted to breathe. I might be mean sometimes if you are mean to me and our my friend Technical.i will only say this once (at the risk of being flagged as a spammer) HES DEAD! HES DEAD!... did i get your attention? now I CHALLENGE YOU! to join us at forum/Reviewer-Brigade/7276/ take the challenge review every single poem/story you read. Challenging? Yes. But definitely worthwhile. to help this sight reach its full potential We have to support each other as writers! *Note: if you have any story your looking to get some feed back on don't be shy just drop us a link
I love quotes yes I do I love quotes here's a few
"Wouldn't it be nice if the world was flat? Then we could just push off the people we don't like." -Anonymous
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams
favorite booksGoliath seriesseriously if you are a steam punk fan and you havent read this book ho to youtube right now and type in [Goliath audiobook] the whole thing is there... go! now!) dreamhouse king series (if you like history jumping you may like this book) pendragon series (i haven finished it yet its 10 books long or should i say to worlds long as each book takes place on a different world, portal jumping, cocky demon bad guy who knows every thing,over all good read) the forest of hands and teeth (now im nut much into the whole zombie craze but if you want a book that will make you want to cry and choke the characters at the same time, while simultaneously rigging your brain to you jump if anything so much as moves in a cluster of trees and you think it may have been red ...right here)
98 percent of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2 percent who hasn't, copy & paste this in your profile
If you have ever ran into a door, copy this into your profile.
If you have ever tripped over your own feet, copy and paste this into your profile.
If you don't watch Laguna Beach or the O.C. or The Hills religiously, never have, never will, and are proud of it, copy and paste this into your profile
If there are times when you wanna annoy people just for the heck of it, copy this into your profile.
If you hate those obnoxious snobby people, PLEASE copy this into your profile.
If you have ever fallen up the stairs copy this into your profile
if you have a teacher who doesn't know what the heck there doing and you hate them because they annoy you paste this into your profile
If you've ever burst out laughing in a quiet room, add this to your profile.
If you have ever pushed on a door that said pull or vise versa, copy and paste this into your profile.
If you’ve ever made faces in front of a security camera then paste this in your profile.
If you think those stupid kids should just give the rabbit the freaking Trix, copy this into your profile.
If you've ever asked a really stupid and obvious question, copy and past this into your profile
If you've ever answered a rhetorical question, copy and paste this into your profile
Even when you can’t see him God is there! If you believe in God, copy/paste this into your profile.
If gym class kills all your self-esteem, copy this into your profile.
If math class kills all your self-esteem, copy this into your profile.
If you've ever copied and pasted something onto your profile, copy and paste this onto your profile.
If your profile is long, copy and paste this on it to make it even longer.
Weird is good, strange is bad, and odd is when you don't know which to call someone. Weird is the same as different, which is the same as unique, than weird is good. If you are weird and proud of it, copy this onto your profile!
92 percent American teens would die if Abecrombie and Fitch told them it's uncool to breathe. Copy this into your profile if you would be in the 8 percent laughing their asses off at the others.
If you or your best friend(s) is insane, copy this into your profile.
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If you've ever talked to yourself, copy and paste this into your profile.
If you haven't died yet, copy and paste this onto your profile.
If you have ever forgotten what you were going to say, right before you say it, copy this into your profile.
If you have ever had a mad laughing fit for absolutely no reason, copy and paste this into your profile.
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If you're against animal cruelty (horse slaughter, bear bating, dolphin hunting, chimp slavery etc.) then copy this into your profile!
If you think that Writer's Block sucs, copy and paste this into your profile.
If you have your own little world, copy and paste this into your profile.
If you have ever gotten so completely sidetracked in a conversation that you don't remember why you were talking in the first place, copy this into your profile.
No one's perfect. If you know and like that your not perfect. Copy this to your profile.
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I am the girl that doesn't go to school dances, or games, and when I do go, I sit in a corner and read a book. I am the girl that people look through when I say something. I am the girl that spends most of her free time reading, writing, or doing other activities that most teenagers wouldn't call normal. I am the girl that people call weird and a freak either behind my back or to my face. I am the girl that doesn't spend all her time on MySpace. I am the girl that hasn't been asked out in a year. I am the girl that has stopped to smell the flowers and jump and splash in the rain. BUT I am also the girl who knows and is proud to be who she is, doesn’t care if people call her weird (it's a compliment), who loves reading and writing and doing the things that no one seems to have the time to do any more, who DOSE NOT loves or obsess with Twilight, who can express herself better with words than actions, who doesn't need a guy to complete her, and knows the importance of the little things. Copy and paste this onto your account, and add your name to the list, if you are anything like me, so the girls who are different and unique can know in their weakest time that they are unique but not alone.: Iheartjake1220, FaerieRose13, Dancer4Life15,Marigold Winters, SparklingTopazEyes, chocoholic4eva, xXKatieCullenX, Bby-Leyla-Vamp, Shiny-silver-volvo-stalker, MegTheVampire, Crimson Love20, Scarlet Dawn, Queenoflove, Bealive-Your-Imagination, Lilchany, suckishLEMONADE, Alice Rocker, Carolina Martinez, tecknicalKnockout ;),
93 percent of American teens would have a severe emotional breakdown if someone called them a freak. If you're a part of the 7 percent who would ask the person, "What was your first clue?", copy this into your profile and add your name to the list: Sunlit Goddess of the C.O.C.A., Moonlit Goddess of the C.O.C.A., Ocean's Nocturne of the COCA, luvablenerd, soraroxas365, Dying-Lunar-Mystery, Alice Rocker, Carolina Martinez, tecknicalKnockout ;),
for the love of humanity!
You know what Mommy
You went to the doctor today.
I can hear that doctor again.
Every Abortion Is Just . . .
One more heart that was stopped.
If you're against abortion, re-post this and if you almost cried post this in your profile
My name is sarah
I am but three,
My eyes are swollen
I cannot see,
I must be stupid
I must be bad,
What else could have made
My daddy so mad?
I wish I were better
I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy
Would still want to hug me.
I can't speak at all
I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up
All the day long
When I awake I'm all alone
The house is dark
My folks aren't home.
When my mommy does come
I'll try and be nice,
So maybe I'll get just
One whipping tonight
Don't make a sound!
I just heard a car
My daddy is back
From Charlie's Bar.
I hear him curse
My name he calls
I press myself
Against the wall.
I try and hide
From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now
I'm starting to cry.
He finds me weeping
He shouts ugly words,
He says its my fault
That he suffers at work.
He slaps me and hits me
And yells at me more,
I finally get free
And I run for the door.
He's already locked it
And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me
Against the hard wall.
I fall to the floor
With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues
With more bad words spoken.
"I'm sorry!", I scream
But its now much too late
His face has been twisted
Into unimaginable hate.
The hurt and the pain
Again and again
Oh please God, have mercy!
Oh please let it end!
And he finally stops
And heads for the door,
While I lay there motionless
Sprawled on the floor.
My name is Sarah
And I am but three,
Tonight my daddy,
child abuse, MAKE IT STOP!
I'm SKINNY, so I MUST be anorexic.
just for fun
1. Grab the book nearest to you, and go to page 111, Paragraph 6. What's the book and write a random sentence from within?
the beginning of after by Jennifer Castle (kinda accidentally stole it from school and never actually read it) "you can do better" ... jee thanks book
2. Stretch your left arm out as far as you hat can you touch?
my cup of tea that ive had sence this morning and its still half full lol
3. Without looking, guess what time it is:
.. 10:00 pm ish
4. Now look at a clock. What is the actual time?
9:51 pm ... close enough
5. With the exception of the computer, what can you hear?
air conditioning and my brothers pretending there gangster (there not)
6. When did you last step outside? What were you doing?
7:30 am to feed the cats
7. Before you started this survey, what did you look at?
my PM box
8. What are you wearing?
hideous plaid shirt that i think is quite comfy kacky pants potato shoes and a knit hat
9. Did you dream last night?
maybe ... (cant remember)
10. When did you last laugh?
like 30 seconds ago when i liked at what i was wearing
11. What is on the walls of the room you are in?
one picture, a mirror, certificate for doing nothing, candel holders with no candels, and a calender from a chinese restaraunt (its pretty cool)
12. See anything weird lately?
... my friend there are weird things all around us every day most of us just have to look in the mirror
13. What do you think of this quiz?
eh ... well im still taking it ...
14. What is the last film you saw?
cars 2 # Madder is teh bomb!
15. If you became a multi millionaire overnight, what would you do?
obligatory 10% to church ill probably sucker myself into feeding the children, helping battered women and fighting cancer so there goes another 10% lock some into a savings bond -40% (just to be safe) set some away to college for me and my siblings so - 20% find a way to make more money! vacation to Tokyo/London ...
16. Tell me something about you I don't know:
im 18 and im 4,9 (yeha yhea laugh it up)
17. If you could change a thing about the world, regardless of guilt or politics, what would you do?
peice on earth damnit ! seriously what the hell are we even fighting about!!!!
18. Do you like to dance?
yes yes i do unfortunately dance doesn't like me
19. George Bush:
... has white hair :)
20. Imagine your first child is a girl. What do you call her?
i have no idea
21. Imagine your first child is a boy. What do you call him?
ill get back to you on that one
--Your guy side--
X You love hoodies.
X You love jeans.
X Dogs are better than cats.
x its hilarious when people get hurt.
x You've played with/against boys on a team.
x Shopping is torture.
x Sad movies suck.
x You own/Ed an X-Box.
x Played with Hot wheel cars as a kid.
x At some point in time you wanted to be a firefighter.
x You own/Ed a DS, PS or Sega.
x You used to be obsessed with Power Rangers.
x You watch sports on TV.
x Gory movies are cool.
x You go to your dad for advice.
x You own like a trillion baseball caps.
X You like going to high school football games.
x You used to/do collect football/baseball cards.
X Baggy pants are cool to wear.
X It's kind of weird to have sleepovers with a bunch of people.
X Green, black, red, blue, or silver are one of your favourite colors.
X You love to go crazy and not care what people think.
x Sports are fun.
X Talk with food in your mouth. (not intentionally)
X Sleep with your socks on at night.
Your girl side:
x You wear lip gloss/Chap stick.
x You love to shop.
x You wear eyeliner.
X You wear the color pink
X Go to your mom for advice.
X You consider cheerleading a sport.(when it’s done professionally shoot that’s no joke)
x You like getting manicures and/or pedicures.
X You like wearing jewelry.(charm necklaces with random trinkets that I find)
x Skirts are a big part of your wardrobe.
x Shopping is one of your favorite hobbies.
x You don't like the movie Star Wars.(ok so I never actually watched it)
x You were in gymnastics/dance. (I wish)
X It takes you around/ more one hour to shower, get dressed, and make-up. (professional procrastinators can change an outfit 11 times in the course of an hour )
X You smile a lot more than you should.(what else is there to do?)
x You have more than 10 pairs of shoes.
X You care about what you look like. (don’t we all?)
X You like wearing dresses when you can. (I only own like 2 though)
x You like wearing body spray/perfume/cologne.
x You love the movies.
X You used to play with dolls as little kid. (Yup)
x Like putting make-up on someone else for the joy/joke of it.
x Like being the star of everything.