Looking for constructive criticism for personal improvement and progress.

Look up in the night sky and you'll see wonders. Every moment one falling aged old star dies while a newborn is created. It glows and shines, radiating a tremendous heat. Following it's path to be what it's purpose is to be. None are identical, given one name. Like humans we follow this cycle. To be born. To age. To die. It is our fate and destiny. To conquer mortality is impossible, only ever accomplished in dreams. You and I are one and the same. Simple humans, players of a game called "Life." Our future lying in the hands of our choices made in the present. What we do now will influence us to become a great or terrible thing.

"ℕothing mℴre tℎan what I can be."

O T H E R S

- Open to majority of genres.

- Willing to return reviews.

- Disclaimer : I do not own the pictures I use, I merely edit them

- Works by Chromatic (Fiction press id: 862519) right fully owned.

- Will return to writing once hectic life ends hope to get more reviews!