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Author has written 104 stories for General, Supernatural, General, Love, Life, Humor, Young Adult, War, Fable, Family, Friendship, Humor, Horror, Mythology, Nature, Thriller, and Biography.

I think it's time for a new bio. The old one was kind of cloying.

My name's Jamil, I'm a 20-something year old writer working out of Adelaide, Australia. I've been writing as long as I can remember.

My work tends towards poetry, or horror when I write longer pieces. Any feedback is appreciated, and it's always a pleasure to chat with fellow writers.

If you're interested, there is a collection of my work, Desolation, available on Amazon Kindle => Desolation, Jamil. M. Hall

Any support is fantastic.

Catch you round.

-J.M.H.

30/12/14

Oh and guess what? There's now a facebook page dedicated to all of my writing endeavours! Head over to www.facebook.com/The.Ineffable.Mr.Hall, and say hello! =)

And Their Clothes Were Made of Spiders by Aeriim reviews
Chernobyl really happened, you know.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K - English - Horror/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 261 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/3/2014 - Complete
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Sonnet of the New Dawn
I still love playing with the structure of sonnets. This takes the form of a Shakespearean sonnet.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Published: 5/19 - Complete
Delusion Apparatus
There's no such thing as a free gift, really..
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Published: 5/18 - Complete
Hidden
Terror is silent
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,226 - Published: 5/7 - Complete
Fragments from the journals of a sociopath reviews
A series of entries taken from the journals of a sociopath. There is no order to the entries, and they all seem to be written at random. But the path will tell if the end is towards order, or to chaos.
Fiction: Biography - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 15 - Words: 1,680 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 5/5 - Published: 1/15
The Doom of Icarus
Would that I could fly..
Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Published: 4/25 - Complete
Bright Eyes
This is my 100th submission to FictionPress! I wanted to write something more impressive than just another poem, so I put this piece together in a couple of hours for you guys. I don't like writing in 1st person perspective very often, so I hope you enjoy this unusual foray. This is just a nice story that can be interpreted a couple of ways. Thanks for everything, FP people! -JMH
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,918 - Published: 2/19 - Complete
In The Flesh
Obviously I have taken certain licence with some aspects of the story, and I make no apologies for that. All I want to do is open the story up for dialogue, and bring it into a more easily relatable context for everybody. I'm not putting up the full narrative here, but this is where all the good teasers and bits I'm proud of will be. )
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: M - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,559 - Updated: 2/16 - Published: 6/12/2014
The Nature of Fear
Title says it all, really.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Published: 2/1 - Complete
Apathy reviews
Stream of consciousness
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/13
All Iterations
Because I love playing with words, and can't help myself.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Published: 1/1 - Complete
Paralysis reviews
Words have too much power.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/28/2014 - Complete
She
This is a thing. This is the record of a thing. This is not the entirety of a thing.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: M - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 733 - Published: 12/17/2014 - Complete
The End of Old
Before the beginning, there was the Word and the void. Rules must be decided before the game begins..
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 817 - Published: 8/11/2014 - Complete
Sonnet of the Winter's Heart
Second attempt at a sonnet...
Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Published: 8/4/2014 - Complete
Punching Fog
Time consumes
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Published: 8/3/2014 - Complete
Sonnet of the Hours
I don't write a lot of structured poetry, but I've been reading a lot of Shakespeare lately, so decided to turn my hand to a sonnet. Mixed results.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/22/2014 - Complete
Like Having Wings
I wanted you to win.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Published: 7/21/2014 - Complete
Beasts
(Pssst! It's a metaphor! Pass it on...)
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 224 - Published: 7/21/2014 - Complete
Sympathy for the Devil
I think everyone's been there..
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Published: 7/21/2014 - Complete
Doomsayer
Clutching at straws
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Published: 7/21/2014 - Complete
The Hunt
Worse than a monkey on your shoulder.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Published: 7/21/2014 - Complete
Siren
Surrealist pap
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Published: 7/21/2014 - Complete
Stream of Consciousness
A little thing about time...
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 285 - Published: 7/20/2014
A Murder reviews
A man was killed today.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/19/2014 - Complete
Another Night reviews
I love winter, and the rain.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/17/2014
The Symptoms of Madness
Desperation isn't an escape hatch.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Published: 7/17/2014 - Complete
Thoughts on Regretting Nothing
Such a pointless phrase. Akin to YOLO. I never thought I'd have regrets, but never is too long to guess.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Published: 7/16/2014 - Complete
Endless Days
Depression is a mother...
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Published: 7/16/2014 - Complete
In Memory reviews
An exercise in memory.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/16/2014 - Complete
Fresh Start
It's nice sometimes to reflect on the beginning of a new thing.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/13/2014 - Complete
Love on Public Transport
Have you ever thought, after momentarily locking eyes with someone on a bus, or in a car beside you, that there's just a flash of connection? The eyes are powerful like that.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 361 - Published: 6/8/2014 - Complete
Fervent Prayer
This is my wish, day in, day out.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Published: 4/10/2014 - Complete
Carbon
Oh, sweet nothing..
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/3/2014 - Complete
Grey Matter
We are all just some lumps of grey ooze.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Published: 3/27/2014 - Complete
The Cave
A little vignette to tie in with a number of other short stories; all revolving around the enigmatic and wholly evil demon, the Malurus.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,132 - Published: 3/26/2014 - Complete
Don't Feed the Trolls reviews
Internet safety.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/22/2014 - Complete
3am
Alone, in the dark. Thoughts are not always your friend.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 488 - Published: 3/22/2014 - Complete
Looking for Love
This was weird to write. I guess everyone wants human contact at some point. Just never thought *I* would. / How bizarre.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Published: 3/15/2014 - Complete
Thoughts and Scenes from a Clifftop
...This is what happens when I'm allowed to write poetry when I just wake up.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 279 - Published: 2/28/2014 - Complete
Awkward
Pretty much.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Published: 2/18/2014 - Complete
Soak it Up
Choose abnormality
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/15/2014 - Complete
He is Dangerous
Some lessons are worth the price.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Published: 2/11/2014 - Complete
The Grey and the Grit
Always questioning reality.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Published: 2/9/2014 - Complete
Feel the Burn reviews
Love is, and always is, a cliche...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/5/2014 - Complete
The Score
Some problems are too large to be solved on your own.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 269 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/4/2014 - Complete
This is Goodbye
An ending, as much as it is.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Published: 2/3/2014 - Complete
Elysium
How can one species of animal be so fragile, yet possessed of such incredible strength?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 324 - Published: 1/30/2014 - Complete
Regret
I don't tend to do regret. A decision made, the consequences lived with. But her...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Published: 1/22/2014 - Complete
Shapeshifter
We are all Protean.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Published: 1/18/2014 - Complete
A Tiny Story for Cynical People
The universe is a tragedy based on numbers. Or, a comedy. There's nothing to say it can't be both.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 471 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/14/2014 - Complete
Happy New Year
Another year is upon us.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Published: 1/1/2014 - Complete
Distrusting Perfection
There's something sly about the angels..
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Published: 11/26/2013 - Complete
A Falling Dream reviews
Those dreams where you're falling... sometimes they don't always end the same.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/17/2013 - Complete
Functional
As time goes by..
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Published: 8/11/2013 - Complete
FactFiction
How my mind works
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Published: 8/11/2013 - Complete
The Nightmare
Night finds me no peace.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Published: 8/11/2013 - Complete
Absurd
No brain filter.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Published: 8/11/2013 - Complete
Ennui
Boredom in a nutshell.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Published: 5/30/2013 - Complete
An Oddity: Space reviews
How bizarre.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/30/2013 - Complete
Gimme
What do we want?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Published: 5/30/2013 - Complete
Displacement
A poem about a vast majority of escapists in this generation. All of these outlets that give you the power to be a hero, be everything you ever wanted. But it all rings hollow in the end.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Published: 5/22/2013 - Complete
Ballad of the Night
The tale of a young lass cut down in the streets.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Crime/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Published: 5/21/2013 - Complete
Pivot
What I want.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Published: 5/19/2013 - Complete
Quotation Generation reviews
A little poem about this generation and how we outsource our entertainment and humour.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/16/2013 - Complete
Broken World reviews
I don't write much structured poetry, so this is a nice change for me. It seems to be about humanity as a whole, across the generations. Everything's different, but has stayed the same.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/13/2013 - Complete
Grey
The feeling when every day is the same, and there's no end in sight. Just the slow doom of the routine.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Published: 5/11/2013 - Complete
Lover
This was written a few years ago. I think it's a good example of how contradictory and symbiotic love can be. Hopefully.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 403 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/11/2013 - Complete
Better
Something I wrote a couple of years ago. A little look at how surreal life can become when love leaves you.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 525 - Published: 5/11/2013 - Complete
Theft
Does anyone else think it weird giving a synopsis of a poem? It's almost like coming into a movie halfway through and having to be caught up on what's happened so far. Weird. I guess this is a poem about life, and people, and how I see people.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Published: 5/5/2013 - Complete
Victory Conditions
There's always a choice, but sometimes both options are as bad as one another.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Published: 5/5/2013 - Complete
Love in the time of Zoloft
Little poem about love and psychosis.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Published: 5/5/2013 - Complete
The Way It Is
This is essentially how my life is. I don't think it's unique, but it's certainly a hard thing to share.
Poetry: Family - Rated: M - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Complete
Sassy Poem for Young Ladies
This was after yet another dazzling display of the current generation's inability to hold their alcohol. Stay classy.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Complete
Vertigolgotha
Another little poem about the fragility of the human spirit.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Complete
No Escape From Paradise reviews
This was a little story I wrote to coincide with the main story that I've been writing for some years now, The Chronicles of The Malurus. This was just something like a mental exercise. But I like it anyway.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 980 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Complete
The Cliff
This is something I wrote years and years ago. If nothing else, I find it a clever exercise with words. See what you think. )
Fiction: Fable - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 836 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Complete
Gamer
Just some thoughts on the way people play games, when too often the stakes are unknown.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Complete
Lament
Thoughts at the end of a long time.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Complete
Neon
A tirade about social norms and bright lights.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Complete
Self-mortification
Something small and weird, as all of my pieces are. Enjoy. )
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Published: 4/20/2013 - Complete
The Chase
It's in my nature to hunt something down. This one's going to take some time. I feel I should say that this is the most important thing I've written lately, and one of the most cathartic. Cheers.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Published: 4/9/2013 - Complete
The Fall
A murder, a witness, a cause.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Published: 4/9/2013 - Complete
Boot
Terrorism goes both ways, you know.
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Published: 4/9/2013 - Complete
James DM
A little tribute to an artist who has always had an amazing effect on my life; who did the best he could, under the circumstances..
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Published: 3/28/2013 - Complete
Hiding
Just a little something about nothing.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Published: 3/26/2013 - Complete
The Tragic Tale of Carson Bellamy
A tale of a young boy who struggles to fit in, but instead turns down a terrible path.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,744 - Published: 3/24/2013 - Complete
Fall
It gets better, but some days you wouldn't know otherwise..
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Published: 3/24/2013 - Complete
Indifference
A testament to days gone past.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Published: 3/23/2013 - Complete
Cutter reviews
This is a poem that presents my experiences with depression and self-harming through my life. It's not particularly nice, but I hope it's able to help someone. I'm not trying to glorify anything, or excuse the actions I've taken, but rather talk it through as it occurred to me. Cheers.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 526 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/23/2013 - Complete
Reflections
The state of a mind that is in no state to be.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 361 - Published: 2/23/2013 - Complete
¡Viva la Revolución!
The natural state of the world is revolution... Always remember.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 335 - Published: 1/23/2013 - Complete
Lord of the Pants
This is without a doubt, the WEIRDEST thing I've ever written.. And I've written some pretty weird things over the years. The strange and amusing and nauseating tale of Phillip, Lord of the Pants. Did I mention he's a cockroach? Because that's pretty important. He's a cockroach.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,417 - Published: 1/17/2013 - Complete
Tension reviews
A stretching of the soul, a yearning for release from the burdens that pull in every direction...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/15/2013 - Complete
The Fight
On a trip to save her marriage, Bethan is an unwilling witness to a rift between worlds, and a war that exists behind the scenes of history. From the unbelievable comes the power to change her life.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,657 - Published: 12/30/2012 - Complete
No Rest reviews
Familiarity breeds..
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/11/2012 - Complete
Time reviews
A little poem about Time. Clearly.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/9/2012 - Complete
Plaster Ball
Surrealist imagination at it's finest..
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Published: 12/1/2012 - Complete
Poem From The Face Of The Mask (Artwork)
Some musings, nothing more..
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 311 - Published: 11/26/2012 - Complete
The Eyes Are The Windows To The Soul
For those who are interested, every verse is in haiku format. )
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Published: 11/26/2012 - Complete
The Killing Joke
The enormity of some lies change lives.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Published: 11/26/2012 - Complete
Anger, Love
When we are young, we rage. This is the anger that has forged the steel of the creation; the steel that has passed through the fire and emerged not flawed but strengthened and tempered.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Published: 11/26/2012 - Complete
The Dreamer
A surrealist explanation of writing, when imagination is more interesting than reality.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 340 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/24/2012
The Chronicles of The Malurus reviews
An ancient evil threatens to destroy everything once created by a loving God. Only one man, twisted and maimed by the oldest demon ever to plague existence, has the power to save the creation. Humanity is all but extinguished, and in his hands is the Ultimate decision.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 13 - Words: 19,750 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/15/2012
Vignette
A short scene about a young woman, struggling with life. Incapable of action, the only result is pain.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 709 - Published: 11/15/2012 - Complete