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Joined 10-29-12, id: 879196, Profile Updated: 02-05-16
Author has written 9 stories for Fantasy, General, Action, Mystery, Fantasy, Horror, and Mythology.

Just call me Tori ;) You don't need my real name.

I'm 17 and in the Senior year of high school. Been writing for a couple years, and beginning to feel a little decent at it, but I'm better at giving other writers advice and such. Planning on being a Developmental (AKA Content) Editor once done with school, so if you need some constructive criticism just ask.

Thank you Miggles for being my first reviewer and FictionPress friend. :) And thank you Clear World for helping me with the first draft of Wingless bird! Oh, and don't forget KuroKage1717 who is my main inspiration on this site! She's an awesome writer too (more than awesome). Inkfngrz is pretty amazing as well!

Thank you for bearing with me, and please have a good day!


Songs of Sacrifice is completed as of February 5, 2016. I plan on doing revisions, but I won't be posting them here on FP. If you want to see them, go to my wattpad account, which is given below.

Overseer 's hiatus will be lifted soon.

The Phoenix Chronicles:

Wingless Bird (book 1) was officially completed July 21, 2014. I want to re-write it, because it's terribly written, but that will have to wait a while.

*The Phoenix Chronicles is most likely being discontinued. Until I re-write book 1, I'm not even going to start book 2.

In Planning:

The Tracker Code - Koya was the leading Identity Thief in the race to world domination, known across the globe by his alias: The Golden Eye. When his own identity is stolen, he drops everything and joins the Bureau of Consumer Protection, swearing revenge. Sent overseas with a crew of experts, he hunts down his identity and hides his past, hoping to capture the newest threat. T Rated. Adventure/Thriller/Comedy/Romance.


I'm not too active on FictionPress, but I will respond to PM's and upload chapters. I'm most active on Wattpad, since I actually have a reader base there.

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I Am A Flyer by KuroKage1717 reviews
He is kidnapped, trained to become something he doesn't want, and forced to fight. But no matter what they say or do, he will be free. Even if it means defying the most terrifying organization on Earth. COMPLETE
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 21,603 - Reviews: 250 - Favs: 121 - Follows: 54 - Updated: 12/1/2018 - Published: 11/22/2007 - Complete
Rules to Die By by Veronica Fay reviews
Rules to Die By
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1 - Reviews: 297 - Favs: 154 - Follows: 99 - Updated: 4/25/2017 - Published: 8/11/2013 - Complete
WAKE by spark n' Jetz reviews
A subject finds himself in an unlikely situation, stuck in a perplexing laboratory,with three other machines. As subject B-14 ventures through the secrets of NEXUS, this intriguing area of experimentation, he's met with a very dark secret that was meant to be kept away forever. Too bad he had to aggravate it. Because that mostly just likely doomed every single other being in NEXUS.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,317 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/16/2014
Unbound, but chained by CrystalDemon reviews
Cana lived in the slums, her mother a drug addict and her step father a drunk. In a society run by demons they barely have enough to get by. She fights in the under ground ring to keep her little brother safe, Tory is her bright spot. Then she gets the news, she's being sold, anything could happen to a young, good looking girl on the demon market. Poor Tory all alone as well...
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 30 - Words: 55,623 - Reviews: 85 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 4/16/2014 - Published: 5/24/2013 - Complete
Phoenix Blazing by Karsten reviews
At eighteen, the Phoenix is already a legend, a warrior who resurrects when killed in combat. Until the night the Phoenix dies and a new girl resurrects in her body. Nix is plunged into a glamorous but deadly world of nightclubs and gunfights, where everyone expects her to be a hero... and if she doesn't solve the murder of the original Phoenix, she may be next.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 18,971 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 3/12/2014 - Published: 12/16/2013
Into The Snow by Wings.Of.The.Raven reviews
Launo Aleeli was a weak boy belonging to a tribe of ice people, barely knowing how to hunt, much less defend himself. Then the item that kept his tribe at peace with the rulers of their land is stolen, forcing him on a journey beyond the end of the world to find it and bring it back with the knowledge that his family will be killed if he fails.
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 20,720 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 1/7/2014 - Published: 2/2/2013
Now That You are Gone by CrystalDemon reviews
this is a tribute to a friend and classmate of mine that passed away recently. He was sixteen, he died in a freak accident. We all miss him, we all loved him, we will never forget him.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 518 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 12/15/2013 - Published: 10/5/2013 - Complete
A New Nation by inkfngrz reviews
After surviving her captivity under the Russians, Akeera's back in action and sarcastic as ever. Now she has to fight to protect the remaining free States with a new partner. Will she be able to finally find her family before the Korean Iranian Russian Alliance get to her? And will Allen be able to tell her his secret? Find out in this sequel to A New Order! (Rated T for violence.)
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 26 - Words: 51,597 - Reviews: 73 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 12/2/2013 - Published: 6/24/2013 - Complete
Wars of Regret by Kumiko Miwa reviews
Theo Kirure, an outcast, lived a carefree life until he accidentally witnesses a fight between two clans. He gets scouted by the Mizore Clan's heir Tear that wishes to defeat the Chizu Clan or else her clan will become their slaves. As he stayed with them, he begins to remember the past he wished to forget and is suddenly targeted. Will he be able to stop the conflict?
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 19 - Words: 60,939 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 11/21/2013 - Published: 6/14/2012
To A Nameless Doctor by Miggles reviews
A poem I won a competiton with at university. It's about my role model in Medicine and why they inspired me.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 362 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/9/2013 - Complete
A New Order by inkfngrz reviews
In the future the US is invaded and ovethrown. But not by the Chinese as everyone expects, rather by a younger but equally dangerous foe. Akeera has to find her missing family but can she? Her search for her family leads her to create alliances with other survivors but can the small team make it through the skeletal remains of the US alive? Rated T for descriptive violence.
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Adventure - Chapters: 23 - Words: 34,628 - Reviews: 77 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 6/22/2013 - Published: 4/17/2013 - Complete
Bedtime by michael.whitehouse1 reviews
"The most frightening story I have ever read", "Terrifying", "I never want to sleep alone again". An account of the most horrifying experience I have ever had. I was a child at the time, but only now do I feel safe enough to even speak of what occurred, during the night, at bedtime. In the darkness something lurked. God help me if it was all real.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,167 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 7 - Published: 4/25/2013
Crash by Your Bird reviews
Emyr is a relatively normal 29 year old man living in London with a boyfriend and a job. He's happy, content, and everything is exactly how it should be. But one day, when a terrible, devastating accident occurs, everything changes. Everything was so perfect...then there was the crash. Rated M to be safe because there are some touchy subjects in this. Please review!
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,743 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/1/2013
The Onyx Tattoo by Snowsheba reviews
In a world divided into seven Masters, a young boy named Polen receives a tattoo that most all find desirable - but it instead leaves him with abilities he wished he didn't have. He turns to the rebel group Solitaire in hopes of sparing anyone his eternally cursed fate, only to find that behind the scenes, there is dark plot afoot that only he, along with some friends, can stop...
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 6 - Words: 20,912 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 11/25/2012 - Published: 4/10/2012
Invisible by True Illusion reviews
i faded away before your eyes and you didn't even notice. plz r&r
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/28/2003
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Songs of Sacrifice reviews
When Ken meets Elliac—a boy with a curse who has to heal and kill a person once a month—his whole world is flipped around. Scared for his life, he tries to avoid the teen. But then Elliac approaches him at school, telling him the truth and asking for help. The curse isn't really a curse, it's a magic. A sacrificial magic that if he doesn't use it, it will kill him.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 21 - Words: 79,431 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 2/5/2016 - Published: 3/25/2014 - Complete
Overseer reviews
Magic vanished from the world eight centuries ago, but its fading presence still lingers in the very soil of Arlyyn, a constant reminder to the people of the power that once filled the lands with riches and hope. With its disappearance countries fell—the people fell. Now, one group is trying to bring it all back. Read if you enjoy myths and magic. Feedback wanted.
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Mystery - Chapters: 11 - Words: 36,837 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/19/2015 - Published: 11/7/2014
The Wilted reviews
Damon, a member of The Unsilent who crowds the city streets. Each day he has his finger on the trigger of his gun, jumping at every shadow, ready for a fight. When their leader is killed mysteriously in the night, the gang is trust into chaos. With fingers pointing at him, due to his past, he struggles to fight his second personality and find out who the killer is. Poem narrative.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,574 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 10/27/2014 - Published: 5/12/2014
Collection of Old Stories reviews
A collection of all the older works that were once posted up on my profile, just so I can clear my works section up. Doesn't matter if they are completed or not, they'll be posted in here. Each story will have it's own chapter, and if it's uncompleted, I might continue to slowly add more when I'm bored and update the chap. I'll put an update date at the top. Short stories here too.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Fantasy - Chapters: 9 - Words: 90,975 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9/24/2014 - Published: 3/26/2014 - Complete
Paper Wings (Temporarily Discontinued) reviews
Sam was a hopeless girl, until her brother jumped off a skyscraper to prove a point to society. Now a raging fire burns in her heart as she continues with his dreams. When Jay comes into her life, she finds another reason to fight and rise up her brother's memory. In this riskful story, there will be change. And she will fly around the world on paper wings in order to invoke it.
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 21,493 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 9/24/2014 - Published: 12/22/2013
10 Sentences - That Night (complete) reviews
A ten sentence short story. Based on a death of a student at the school my father works at.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Family/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/14/2014 - Complete
Wingless Bird (Complete) reviews
The Phoenix is searching for someone new, one who has potential in some way or form. And that search led them to Anton. Which he never thought could be possible, being a lazy dreamer with no courage within him. But when strange events start happening, each set and played by a demonic thief and his leader, he learns that being a Wingless Bird is better than death. Or so he thinks...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Mystery - Chapters: 36 - Words: 113,675 - Reviews: 76 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 7/26/2014 - Published: 11/5/2012 - Complete
Collection of Old Drafts
This is a collection of all of my old drafts for The Phoenix Chronicles, so that I don't have to leave them posted up at the bottom of my stories. If you want to see how my infamous series had started out, it's all written here in plain sight. Draft 3 might be posted here soon, as I'm going to write a 4th to upgrade the writing style and plot a bit.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 9 - Words: 61,171 - Published: 11/14/2013 - Complete
20 Sentences - Shattered (Complete) reviews
I was challenged to write a 20 sentence short story, so, here it is! Can anyone understand the meaning of the piece?
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 373 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/27/2013 - Complete
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