Virye Lerbern
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Joined 11-24-12, id: 884244, Profile Updated: 01-14-15
Author has written 6 stories for Humor, Romance, Young Adult, Horror, and Manga.

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How do you capture a readers attention? What does an author do to obtain many reviews? I want to know so I can make a story worth reading. So you won't say that was a waste of time. Tell me your ideas or moreover, tell me if you want to work on a story. I have found that I enjoy it immensely when trying to do a collaboration with someone. You can tell me. I'll take on a beta reader if it means I can reach over twenty-five reviews. To a point where my story is so good it'll get put into a community. That way, I can be a little smug about it for once.


Longing to pursuit any sort of dream, I signed up on this site in hopes that I could write something. I like to think I can write almost any genre, and with this thought in mind, it may give me courage to enchant you with my words as I think that is what most authors want.

As for my own story, the one of my life, I am just a normal young woman. I have two older brothers which makes me the youngest. My parents are divorced but live under the same roof. Just knowing from little information I have given you, you could assume I am one step away from being a sitcom. Or, depending on the day, a drama.


An Unfortunate Misconceptional Relationship: (I decided to give this story one more shot. There's plenty of revisions and new dialogue.)

I regret a lot of things, for instance, figuring out that I am in love with my best friend after he gets engaged, having an ally that's supposed friends with the bride-to-be, trying to fan out the flames when coming up with a theme for a bachelorette party, keeping tabs on the Dynamic Evil Duo from ruining my plot to break off the engagement, getting my other best friend from trying to sleep with every guy that is related to the fiance, and let's not forget I'm going to be in the wedding but as the Best Man. Could life get any worse for me? I'll let you be the judge of that.

Tailored To Suit You: Mimiko is just a girl trying to let go of the past and live a drama free life. Too bad trouble is a friend who brings a few companions she never wanted to meet. As she does her best to stick with her morals, it becomes more obvious to her what she may wind up sacrificing something in the end. If only she could figure out that it may not be so bad to allow change or to be who you really are. [This is a collaboration with a friend of mine who currently does not have an account on here, nonetheless, reviews would be nice to let her know she's a good writer!]

God Is ON MY Side: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rFm9FR0AJlY

Happy Buddha: Janice lives a normal life filled with quirky friends. Then everything changes for the fifteen year old when she is forced to get a job over the summer break. What started out as a way to earn a paycheck and to get rid of a debt soon turned into an all out freak show filled with drunkards, clowns, and a nudist colony. This excludes her coworkers she works with on a daily basis. If she can survive the temptations of the food there and her attractive new coworker then there is hope for her yet.

Redemption of Another Kind: Lyra Richardson has finally come undone, she must leave home to catch the ones who murdered her parents but at what cost? Leaving her younger sister with an absolute stranger was never a part of the plan yet if she gave up the rumors that have once again risen in her town then she may not ever seek out her revenge. Join her as she encounters mythical beings such as lycans, nymphs, witches, and the likes in this tale to find not only peace but maybe something more.

(VERAI AND I ARE ONE IN THE SAME SO DON'T START FREAKING OUT!!!)

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How to Survive a Zombie Apocalypse by Lolitroy reviews
Duff became sixteen the day the world ended. Was she sad? Nah! In a zombie apocalypse, you can make graffiti on libraries, set buildings on fire, throw boomerangs at people... in other words, heaven. The only bad thing is the fact that you can't pee in peace...
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Parody/Friendship - Chapters: 7 - Words: 10,132 - Reviews: 393 - Favs: 59 - Follows: 62 - Updated: 2/12 - Published: 2/29/2012
It's Not as Bad as This by Shutterfly Simmons reviews
Do you think your stories are not great? Do you need cheering up? Do you want to make fun of something? This is a collection of horrible stories that I wrote when I was a kid. Ranging from continuity issues to huh? moments, "It's not as Bad as This" makes anyone feel better about their work and is guaranteed to make you go wait, what? Inspired by Lumosify's "What Editing Really Is"
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,174 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 1/22 - Published: 11/23/2014 - Complete
The Truth About the Truth by Shutterfly Simmons reviews
I was really bored.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/5/2014 - Complete
Forever My Love by TaraLin89
Fresh out of school, four young people try to maneuver their way through love, life, and careers.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,204 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/3/2014
Familiar by jakbnimble reviews
Ryker lives in a world of magic, heroes, and destiny. Esha is a country girl from a simpler place. Neither of them are prepared for what Fate has planned for them. Their lives intertwine when a prophecy arises surrounding Ryker and his familiar being. Together they will be renowned heroes, but only if they can overcome the world's darkest evils.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 29 - Words: 58,150 - Reviews: 158 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 1/11/2013 - Published: 9/30/2012
Losing Hope and Finding Love by TaraLin89 reviews
Jordan doesn't care anymore. He has lost the love of his life and she seemed to take his ability to sympathize with her. So why can't he stop wanting to help the pregnant girl, Peyton, across the hall? M Rating is to be safe and for later chapters
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 9 - Words: 42,926 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 11/1/2011 - Published: 8/31/2011
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Pleased To Make Your Acquaintance reviews
There is more to (after)life than what meets the eye. For after you commit suicide what else is there to do other than to keep on living? The long painful process to get back what you've lost or to gain more is all you can do after all. If not, then you can kiss your entire existence goodbye. (Will improve description later, if I feel like it.)
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,259 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/19
Gravely Mistaken reviews
This is an extremely short story if you haven't already checked out the word count. I wanted to write something a little dark since everything I've been writing has been humorous or romantic. Which, by the way, if your into that stuff go review those. Anyways, let me know what you think!
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 273 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/13/2014 - Complete
An Unfortunate Misconceptional Relationship reviews
Grace has finally found the love of her life; Too bad he's getting married. What was once an act to deny her feelings until he was mature has backfired. She'll find out the hard way that age is just a number. If she has any luck at all in winning him back she'll have to rely on others help. Friend's last forever, right? (Please review)...Summary inside!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 15,968 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 12/8/2014 - Published: 11/7/2014
Happy Buddha reviews
Janice lives a normal life filled with quirky friends. Then everything changes for the fifteen year old when she is forced to get a job over the summer break. What started out as a way to earn a paycheck and to get rid of a debt soon turned into...Check inside for the rest of the description. (Spin-off story of An Unfortunate Misconceptional Relationship, please leave reviews)
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 3 - Words: 972 - Reviews: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/6/2014
God Is On MY Side reviews
Under the name Virye Lerbern, there is a YouTube video. It is on that site you will see God Is On My Side, please watch for description and excerpt.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,920 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/13/2012
Tailored To Suit You reviews
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Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,033 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/12/2012 - Published: 12/11/2012
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