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Joined 03-16-13, id: 906682, Profile Updated: 08-24-16
Author has written 8 stories for Young Adult, Life, Love, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural, and General.

Hello! Call me Oku, or Noin, whichever you prefer! That's me in the avatar picture.

I'm newly embracing the world of writing following a long time love of literature from across the world. I am a 23 year old student, set to study Japanese at a British university in the autumn.

My major work: I'm currently working on a mystery drama novel (NaNoWriMo '12 winner) called 'Sweet Shaved Ice'. The story follows Kate, a young woman who is searching for her missing brother, Thomas. The search takes her to Sunrise, a secluded gated community in the south of England - where she discovers remnants of his past - which blend dream and reality, revealing a shocking revelation about his fate. The story focuses on human drama in an exotic world that is filled with mystery, sexuality, tragedy and murder. Chapters will be published here on FP, please look out for them in the days leading to the summer!

My minor work: My minor work is largely different ideas I'm playing around with, or scenes and settings I picture in my mind and want to try and put down in to words. I like to experiment a lot, and combine abstract elements with human drama. I will write/publish a handful of short stories a week. The vast majority are one-shot pieces, however, a dark fantasy titled 'Returner' is a continuing story with a returning cast of characters and places.

All reviews/feedback will be returned

Critical eyes are very much welcome!

Thanks for reading! Okunoin.


I'm currently working on a new project - a young adult/children's fantasy novel - The Orende Chronicle [Working Title] - seeking alpha readers - get in touch.

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Like Cog Work by Harper.J reviews
Clara is a teenage girl living in london who has an odd fascination with old or vintage objects. Clara, after visiting her grandmother in the school holidays one day finds herself lost back in a time she doesn't know with insane, robotic, feminist women trying to obtain the strength they believe men have over them. Her only way out is the old pocket watch her grandmother gave her.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Mystery - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,536 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 5/23/2013 - Published: 4/3/2013
Bereft by A Shade of Her reviews
Memories hold clues . . . but what if the memories are gone?
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 918 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/20/2013 - Complete
Becoming Legend by The Quiller reviews
Bastion, the last great human civilization, is besieged by demons. No one knows from whence they come - at least, not until a wretched young man, marked for death but refusing to die, sells his soul for power. Let the skies fall. Let the world burn. Let it be known that even gods can be killed. He will stop at nothing to become the greatest legend ever told.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,181 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 3/11/2013 - Published: 3/6/2013
bombs by Scriptertwist reviews
Companion piece to 'tell me a story'. Two men wait in a library for destruction.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,097 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/7/2013
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Apple and Cinnamon reviews
Sanshiro reflects on the long summers of his youth; his rivalries, his struggle to find his own identity and his difficulties in finding a place in a world which has no room for him. A brutal coming of age story. Some chapters will be rated 18 All reviews/feedback returned.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,994 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/3/2013 - Published: 3/29/2013
All That Glitters reviews
'All That Glitters' is a short story which sees two plane crash survivors stranded on a beach, one is blinded, and the other can not move. Can these two strangers offer each other comfort in their final moments? [Labyrinth contest winner]
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,859 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 4 - Published: 3/19/2013 - Complete
Inside and Outside reviews
'Inside and Outside' is a short story focusing on the final moments of a man named Shuya. He is becoming a demon, a vampire, and his childhood friend Em wishes to say goodbye to the boy she once loved, but he dares not show her his face.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,649 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/18/2013 - Complete
Night Fishing reviews
'Night Fishing' is a short story focusing on two boys who share a quiet love of each other. They reminisce about the past and share their feelings about the future, while fishing through the twilight hours. But is all as It seems? A death connects Sam with Taku, but whose death? And when is it time finally let go?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,825 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/17/2013 - Complete
Repeater reviews
'Repeater' is a short story which takes the reader to the land of Yue Irlas, a place which would seek to satiate the Goddess of Death, Namza, in hopes to stem her thirst for death, to ensure prosperity for the next thirteen years.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,231 - Reviews: 9 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/17/2013
Fell from the Bough reviews
'Fell from the Bough' is a sonnet, written in iambic pentameter which describes the moment a man stumbles upon the tomb of a recently deceased woman. He sees the corpse of the woman and immediately falls in love with her, and weeps that he will never have that love returned.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/16/2013 - Complete
The Sheep Chase
'The Sheep Chase' is a free verse poem written from the point of a view of a lunatic as he wanders the busy streets of a city shopping district. The writing reflects his stream of consciousness as he views and interacts with the world around him. Can you make sense of it?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 274 - Published: 3/16/2013 - Complete
Kiina reviews
'Kiina' is a short story that details the seven days of two women who come to know each other following a murder. Ellen is a student suffering in the summer heat, and the mysterious Kiina comes into her life, and offers her respite from the eternal summer. But who is Kiina?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,580 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/16/2013 - Complete