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Author has written 1 story for Romance.

My name's Becca and I'm 14 years old. I like reading manga, writing stories and watching anime.

One in His Sights Trivia

Information on: Characters

Daniel is lactose intolerant.

For two years of school Max was incredibly skinny. In the very middle of these two years, he was skinny to the point his bones were outlined on his skin.

Brian, although one of the prisoners who has been in the dungeon longest, took over for a previous prisoner who had considered it his job to protect the people. The prisoner was called Erwin and offered Brian this duty in his old age. After Erwin's death, Brian immediately filled his role.

Daniel first came out to his parents when he was 13.

Information on: Deleted Scenes and Removed Content

Chapter 6: This chapter was originally planned to be much longer and the scene was much further extended. A part of why the chapter is so short is because of about 200 words deleted after I looked them over and came to the conclusion that the original scene I'd written was much too dark for this close to the beginning of the story. I also hadn't yet prepared my readers for anything like what I had initially written, and so I cut it out and rewrote a few parts of the chapter before submitting.

Chapter 10: The sex scene between Aden and Daniel was originally planned to be shown. I removed this because I felt it unnecessary and it slowed plot movement.

Chapter 13: Brian's final bit of dialogue was edited. When he says, "Nobody wants another member of the family to go through what many of us already have", the initial line was different. In the original draft, the line is: "Nobody wants another member of the family to go through what me and many others have".

Chapter 16: The first scene of the original chapter 16 was much longer than the final product which I eventually updated as the chapter 16 for the readers on Fictionpress. For the final draft, I looked over the scene once more and removed about 600 words of description. The break to Aden and Jargon hadn't originally been a cliffhanger in the original chapter 16, but the removal of a great deal of content made it inevitable. This decision was based on consideration for my readers. Many references to the original chapter 16 remain in chapter 17 despite the removal of the content. I believed that the original chapter 16 could have been possibly upsetting for a great deal of readers.

Chapter 17: Originally, Brian was to remove his eye patch and reveal the eye that he'd been stabbed in to show Daniel that he could be trusted because he trusted Daniel. My choice to remove this was because of the detail in the description of the eye.

If you would like more information on any character backstory or would like me to describe or even send any of the cut scenes, please contact me via private message.

EDIT: Unfortunately, the deleted scene from chapter 6 is no longer available as I have lost it on my computer.

One in his Sights reviews
Prince Aden was not interested in any of the girls his father saw as ideal matches and choices for him. There was only one in his sights. The Duke's son, his cousin Daniel. Slash m/m.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 10,047 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 12/22/2014 - Published: 2/23/2014