Why don't you just read it? Also please leave reviews.

Okay so basically I'm thinking of writing a book, but I want to know that if this first paragraph is the best way to start off my book, which if you couldn't tell by the title would be a romance that just sucks you in. So if you could please give me feedback that would be great. Also i used the name lilly because it's my name but it's really more of a placeholder.