Hakalau Tom
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Joined 10-07-14, id: 998489, Profile Updated: 12-13-14

I am a reader and an amateur editor. I don't write stories. I relate better to stories where the main characters are people and the laws of nature are what most of us experience, but I'm flexible as long as I can grasp the rules for what happens. I'm a sucker for off-beat plots and characters, but also enjoy a well-worn plot path, well traveled.

Big Picture - Chapter 1 by Eric Schilling reviews
A washed-up detective meets with a potential CI, only to find that there's something bigger involved. [This is only part of the much longer story: revision suggestions wanted, and feel free to review as you please. Be constructive if you can]
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,750 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/6/2015
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